In my series on crafting your stories to resonate with your readers’ emotions, I asked for excerpt submissions that I could take and apply those concepts to in order to provide an example of what I’ve been talking about. So today I’ll be showing you a piece of Grace A. Johnson‘s writing which she submitted, along with my commentary!
In case you missed it:
Crafting Emotional Resonance: Part 1 – Character-Driven Description
Crafting Emotional Resonance: Part 2 – Character Reactions
Crafting Emotional Resonance: Part 3 – Repressed Emotion
Crafting Emotional Resonance: Part 4 – Precise Prose
Critique Structure
I’ve never done a critique for a blog post before, so you’ll have to bear with me as I develop a layout for it.
First, I want to lay out Continue reading “Crafting Emotional Resonance – Example Critique”